All Comments on 'Identity Crisis'

That was beautiful. <3

Brilliant story, and very well written! A possible next part perhaps? Would love to read about what happens to these two next!

I to would enjoy a second part to this story.

Loved it. Very well written. Please continue. = )

So please continue.

Wish I could give it a 10. Please continue as there's more to tell. Thank you for this wonderful story.

Yeah, a sequel might be rather nice

Thank you all for your kind comments. I had only intended this as a one-shot, but based on the feedback I've gotten so far, I'm considering a sequel. But my muse is fickle, so I only ask that you be patient with me. But thank you for reading!

An incredibly beautiful story. Excellent work!

Please keep it up. This story was so erotic and well written.

Such an intense and loving story... Please continue on with this one!

Thank you so much!

L

very enjoyable read.

write whatever your heart tells you and you will do just fine.

I very much enjoyed this, and I'd love to read a sequel!

~ L

Brava! Brava!! This is such an incredible story, one for which, I will go back and read again and again. Princessnocturne, there has to be a sequel, please. What happens when Fiona goes back to school with passion marks on her neck and the verbal abuse intensifies more especially from that a-hole boy. Coupled with Rianne's temper and protectiveness over Fiona - BOOM!!! That's an explosion waiting to happen and I would love to see it. Great job princess!

To anyone who's interested, the sequel has been submitted and is now pending approval. So within a day or two it should be posted. Thanks again, everyone who read and/or commented, your support really means a lot! :-)

This is a really fine piece of work. You could be published anywhere.

Don't use baby wipes for that! I hate the way they smell, and that weird smell lingers on my hand all day until I make a point of washing my hands thoroughly.

Please don't spoil the fragrance and flavour of your delicious pussy with those damn things!

This was good