All Comments on 'Identity Pt. 01'

by BlackRayne24

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved...

This storys' start, continue soon. Definitely hooked me.

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiover 11 years ago
good

what a good start you have here,darling.

KittybalooKittybalooover 11 years ago

More more!!!

Loved this, very dark & mysterious.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 11 years ago
Good start but

how are you going to fit the nonhuman aspect in here? Is it even necessary to the story? I love were stories but your storyline is already complex without the supernatural element. I'm definitely interested in reading more, but I hope you don't spoil it by over-complicating.

emidozaemidozaover 11 years ago
more

Just read a second time. Please write more.

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertabout 11 years ago

My comment is directed to the individual with concerns that the story was leaning towards supernatural. It is her story to tell, if the story did make that turn you would still be here reading.Just because someome utter the word "Mine" dose not make them a ware. Love the story just discover it. Hopefully you will update soon?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
hurry

i cant wait for a new chapter

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