All Comments on 'Identity Theft'

So Rebecca is a terrible person and makes good on stealing her sister's life too easily.

I find it funny how people beat around the bush speaking of “non consent” when it is just plain rape. Just admit it, you like rape.

Loved this story! You write good, just a pity it finished too soon. Would lke to read more about Rebecca and Alice.

Non consent is off cause without consent. If ppl dont like that, just browse the other categories.

It seems intentional that you wrote Rebecca as a heartless monster. Hmmm… intentional?

Normally you want the reader to cheer for the protagonist and in a revenge story, you need to give Alice a backstory that makes her unlikable and one that fits the punishment.

You have writing chops but I think this significantly weakens the story.