by SexyGeek
Unique idea, well executed, I enjoyed your take on the crux point of the original story — what did Robert Graves call his translation — 'The Anger of Achilles"? Thank goodness you decided to do your story in prose... lol.
I rather enjoyed this tale. Homer is probably rolling over in his grave, but what the heck. Lusty men of that age needed lusty women that could keep up and the sex they created had to be monumental. Great job!
Roger.