All Comments on 'If Only In My Dreams'

I liked this story. More please.

Can anyone please enlighten me as to what the previous comment means? Who is REVEREND MIKKI? I only ask because it seems to be popping up everywhere. I would really appreciate it.

Thank you

A real good read. I was enjoying it so much, I was sad when I got to the end. Thank you for posting this.

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Please make a second part! A second part where (just an idea) she woke up, realized it was a dream, gets pissed off, but along the story (at some point, take your time on plotting) she does get Sarah in reality. That's just simple plotting, I'd write a second part myself but this is your story and your characters. This really could be a good set-up for a longer story. You lengthen it, good plot, this could be a hall of famer. :)