All Comments on 'If That's Your Excuse Ch. 03'

by simplyluvable16

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PennLadyPennLadyalmost 15 years ago
Nicely done

I think the interactions between Ben and Lexi are quite believable. I don't know how realistic they are ;), but they're believable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
LOVE this story so far!

My only gripe would be that I wish the chapters were a bit longer. Other than that, this is such a great story and I love your writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Enjoyed it

Looking forward to next post.

SchokoladeSchokoladealmost 15 years ago
Enjoyed it

Looking forward to next post.

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