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by Natashia27

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good start, and very sensual

Well written, quite unusual on this site, and well paced. I really liked the sensuality. However, decide on the tense that you want to use, and stick with it for the whole story. Looking forward to your next effort.

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