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by trishotoy99

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ignorant village boy 02

Well, it shows.

English isn't your first language. The story has potential but doesn't really strike a positive chord.

trishotoy99trishotoy99over 6 years agoAuthor
Ignorant village boy 2

Thanks Anonymous for your comment. English isn't my first language, I need guidance to write better. Thank you very much.

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