All Comments on 'I'll Always Take Care of You Ch. 02'

a little too much sex content for me, but the story-line is just great! i can't wait for further chapters!

Don't you dare leave us hanging now.

continue with this story

I just love this story pleaseeeeeeeeeee continue.

Just as good as the first part. Keep it going!!!

great stories and give us more.

Wonderful story - can't wait for the next part - thanks a million

As with the first chapter of this story, you've managed to convey the love that the members of this family have for each other as well as their sexual intensity. Please continue this story line for as long as you can.

I am really glad you decided to continue. I can't wait until the next installment.

I like the way the author puts in all of the extra little bits of information into the story. The electric car, and his recipe for apples,etc., that makes the story more alive. I still am very curious about what he will find at the attorneys, and how the family will interact after he takes over all of the family affairs. It would be great if Ellen would become pregnant, and all of the girls pledge their love to him only, and not get involved with other men.Thanks for the great story, and I hope to see more on the life of the brother and his step-sisters.....Rich

Great story keep it up. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Such a pleasure to read a well written story. They are so few and far between.

Will be waiting patiently for the next chapter.

Absolutely great story. I'm definitely looking to see more of this one.

Great stuff

please continue.this is one of the best stories i've read on this site..the other being montana summers a year or so ago..please continue very soon..

First time doing this but here goes, a great story, well thought out (great and correct and concise content) as well as having depth of field, please consider going to a publisher with your work i think you go far and please dont wait to long for the next thrilling chapter in this series, i will eagerly be checking daily for updates. i do get somewhat confused between the twins but that does not detract from the story i feel it adds to what the carecter feels anyway enough of me. thank you and well done will sign up as dingleberry33

Please continue this story for it is very good and hottly entertaining.

Superb

These two stories are some of the best that i have read. Please keep it going.

DONT U DARE STOP!

He gores from zero to hero in like 1 or 2 nights sorry the whole story is just such bs.

Loved it. Makes me wish I were Davey. Great writing, fantastic story. Don't listen to the naysayers, the story's great.

It's a great story but I miss being concerned with the characters like I was with the ones in conflicted by eldridge. I appreciate your writing though and this is still a great story. The only thing I would like more of is more "story" in the story.

Is such a great story. Love the gently build-up.

I hope to see this continue.

for sharing your interest in technology with us readers, it is a nice touch, and probably a unique thing for authors here on this site. This is the third time around that i read this series, and i have to say, it gets better and better every time i read it. In my opinion, you are at the very least one of the top five authors here on Literotica. Keep up the good work Doc!

Makes the story believe able and if I'm. Not mistaken that's the tesla roadster right?

Excellent writing, hot sex, beautiful people doing sexy things with each other. Lots of hardship and sadness in the beginning. All very good elements and certainly better handled than I could do BUUUT, this chapter lacks tension and fails to keep me in the fictive dream. Even if I can't imagine being a rich boy genius, I can imagine sex with my sex goddess sisters if I had to overcome SOMETHING to earn/deserve it.

I'll keep reading, perhaps what I seek is buried a little deeper in the story. CONGRATULATIONS

I've loved this story from end to end so far. I actually enjoy reading it for the characters and, believe it or not, the sex is just an added bonus! I've been reading this on my Ipad and have another stor or three from other authors loaded on my linux desktop. Good thing this is my current go-to read since the last story on my desktop machine is so bad I literally had to stop in the middle of because of the horrible writing, grammar and beta lead character, ugh!

Love your story and the awesome characters. You could wtite on these folks for years and it would still be entertaining and enjoyable!

Your story is not only about sex, it's about love. I'm having a hard time putting it down.

I found this on here and I know it was written 5 years ago but it is real good!!

Rereading the story again! :). Its only ch2 and I think if he says 'Ill always take care of you' one more time I think Ill have to cut out his tongue and shove it up.... Ahem... :)

Ellen and Davey...He Loves Her. Great story.

The only electric vehicle available internationally that ones anywhere close to what you describe is the Tesla - check it out on YouTube; there are also Cnet and other drivers evaluations on line as well.

Look up Tesla motors. They have developed three electric models that are quite incredible...

Where is part 1?

If you're interested, you can find Chapter 1 here:

https://web.archive.org/web/20090312091602/http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=405225