All Comments on 'I'll Always Take Care of You Ch. 04'

As with the past 3, this segment leaves me wanting more, not only more great sex...but more insight into the lives of this family. I love the back story as much as the front sex....keep it up!!!

So is Ellen and Suzie step-sisters to the twins, and is David a step brother to all of the girls? How ever it is I really enjoy the story, and the sex is outstanding. Thanks for the chapter......Rich

Even without the hot, hot sex, this story is captivating. When I read your bio comments on Saturday that chapter 4 was to be released today, I was jazzed all weekend waiting for today to arrive. As with all of the other chapters, this one was worth waiting for. Hopefully, chapter five will follow shortly. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing you talent with all of us readers.

More, More says it all! Please hurry. Not as bad as the last hanger but you have OUR ATTENTION!

i loved it and i cant wait much longer

your story is very good to this point but....

WHERE IS CH. 5?

i frequently check back on some stories and this is one of them

i couldnt stop reading it.. and couldnt stop cumming reading it...

I liked the part on the G4 both the sex and the new information. However that is just in this segment (I did start reading 5 but i was totally lost so i had to go back to 1 and read from there to get background. What I would like to see is to have more threads that weaves from 1 story to the next. Just have the same sex but just changing different rooms does not add to the story. the dave/ellen jen/jan comparison was not much a revelation ( I figured it out 2 stories earlier.) Once I have read up to the present story I will try to think of a new angle that you might have not thought of.

I LIKE this series. Great job!

Nothing to add except that this is one of my favorite series ever. Well done again!

Thank you for providing us with this great series. This is why I keep coming back to Literotica every time. Great characters, great storyline, good writing.

size 15, i know how hard good shoes are to find

Please don't take this the wrong way. I care deeply about this series. One of the best from what I read from here. But I seem to be noticing a trend between writers. Please, as much as possible, do try to describe your characters more. Help paint their images in our minds as to burn them forever as they orgasm. How their hair looked like, their eyes, complexion, the scenes, the atmosphere. Everything. It would make the whole scenario relatable and livable. Thank you :)

one of the best stories I've read, I only hope the ending of this story is just as good. I hope they all stay together have lots of babies and live happily ever after but I have an awful feel it ain't going to happen..God , I hope I'm wrong....5 stars so far

I have been reading this series this afternoon and I am blown away not just at the eroticism of the story by by your writing style. You keep things hot,sexy and intense but you are never afraid to inject a little playful humor into the story. I love that. Really a great series and I am am looking forward to enjoying the rest.

Still a hot story. Only criticism is that you did not have to make them all into physically impossible sexual athletes.

Also, why is it they are all bisexual women who meet and share other bisexual women. You do realise the clear vast majority of women in the world are NOT bisexual and would never be so. Just a thought.

Another thought, This family would need to be very careful about their activities. Incest is kept very covert for obvious reasons, incest does not share.

The majority of men do NOT share their women knowingly. It’s just not in our nature. Given Daley’s upbringing there is no way he would share Ellie with anyone else bar his sisters. It’s just the way it is.

Scores 5/5