All Comments on 'I'll Be Watching You'

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Cinnamon_TartCinnamon_Tartalmost 7 years ago
Beautiful, and erotic

I wonder why I love this so much.....;) xxx

dreamer3366dreamer3366almost 7 years ago
@Cinnamon_Tart

Because he makes you feel unsettled, leaves you wanting with his unexpected appearances. I thought of the police song minor key version by Chase Holfelder while reading this (https://youtu.be/0PLNsymQi3Y). I caught myself holding my breath and then felt lost when he would disappear. I wanted him to stay, I wanted him to want me. Yes, I got caught up by this story that it still haunts me in a most delicious way. Kudos to the author, when in reading they make you feel/live the story. Thank you for that.

PS I have posted the link to the minor key version.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Without broader context, it is just like the song, basic stalker 101 behavior. I feel the unease and inherent threat, but not any of the comforting protection I feel necessary for a D/s relationship. Someone else's flavor; not my cuppa.

ContrastingContrastingalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks Dreamer3366

Hey, thanks for the link, that is outstanding. As always, thanks for the comment, appreciated very much. -C

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Anticipation

I enjoyed most of what you wrote, my logic struggled with all the work required to show up and disappear time after time but understood it was a necessity to your strategy. It left me wanting more 👍🏼thanks

DontknownowDontknownowalmost 3 years ago

Somehow haunting and exciting at the same time

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