All Comments on 'I'll Buy The Thong. You Put It On.'

Maybe it's just what I've gotten used to from other authors on here, but I feel like the story was just cut off right as it was getting into it. It could use another page or two of sex/story, and a better taper off at the ending. It feels kind of like you turned the engine off right as you were starting to rev up! Otherwise it was really entertaining!

You have provided another well written piece of work and again really couldn't find much to fault. I have to agree though it does feel like you have cut it short and perhaps even rushed the encounter. Still enjoyable to read though.