by SecretSecretary
Be good to add Cindy one of the other secretaries to the sex play. Getting Michelle to eat out Cindy, Cindy to eat out Michelle and for both of them to engage in tribbing with each other.
Very good way of building up the sensations along with the emotions , rather than Mich being a wanton all of a sudden , her emotions of reluctance is well described and real . As well as Derek's emotions and after thoughts are well put , it' sexy , steaming but with emotions and hope it flows with that hint of romance.
She starts with it being exciting then part way through she goes on about hating him and trying to dissuade him and then ends with her liking it again. What the hell is this chick bi-polar or something, stick with one or the other.
She's young and naive. Do you really think she would know NOT to chill Merlot? She's clearly not worldly and a little immature.
5 to offset this fool's 1 vote