All Comments on 'I'll Do Anything, Sir Ch. 03'

Editor!

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Wow so sexy!

A good concept and basic story, let down by silly spelling and grammar errors.

I'll give you some examples.

I doubt a lawyer would send an email with such short sentences:

"Mandatory Meeting. 2:00 PM. Today. Large conference room."

It would probably read:

"There will be a meeting at 2:00pm today in the large conference room, attendance at this meeting is mandatory for all staff."

Please bear in mind one of the central characters is not some yobbo, he is a highly educated lawyer, they like to make full use of the English language, in and out of court.

"maybe proctor's retiring after that settlement for the Campbell case." His name should be capitalised.

This one seems to be regular error in posts at Literotica:

"Her taught body was long and lean." Her body was "taut," it had not been educated in the past.

I hope you will find this helpful.

Needs editing, sexy scenes but would have liked a romantic ending .

I liked the other two chapters, but I have trouble with this one.

I love the submissiveness of Michelle, but like always I don't like when the guy shares his conquest. I'm very selfish!!! And in this case he has forced her to stop taking the pill. OK, I like impregnation stories too. But now he is making her have unprotected sex with complete strangers??? In my fantasy, she will have MY baby.

Derek had THE Best Way of Seducing a Woman for The Long Run! She Is His Forever! Their Content! More Chapters Possible?

...that was good.. More from you would be really good...

good story and annony is the only POS on here1

That was intense dude

the sharing was unnecessary

OMG, loved it! Want more of their story. Would like to know why he didn't want her on birth control if he was going to share her. Came so hard throughout each chapter...need a cigarette