All Comments on 'I'll Show Him'

seems to be missing the delivery of the revenge and fallout.

Kind of pointless. Where was the "show him"?

Pointless. Kind of stupid

Yeah, I'll take those comments.

This was going to be part of a larger story (clearly) but I never got around to finishing it. I was just throwing this out just to see what kind of feedback I'd get to see if I could find the motivation to finish it...

Okay, I am a great fan for misguided, disorganized, over-the-top sexual revenge. But obviously there is much more to this story than we readers have been privy to. I award 3 Stars in anticipation of forthcoming chapters. Otherwise I have sadly overrated this story.

Was building to a nifty confrontation with her boyfriend and then,POOF ,the story just ends.

Figured after having sent that BJ vid to her bf as revenge,she'd find out that the e-mail was indeed a mistake,and that it wasn't her boyfriend cheating at all.

He was so pissed that he e-mailed everyone who knew her that he had an address for.

The dumb twat was history!

Good story of revenge and taking revenge.

But others say we need the 'punch line'.

Keep writing.

REgards