All Comments on 'Illicit Entry Ch. 01: Home Ground'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

It was really amazing. I masturbated twice reading it. Would love to read a sequel as soon as possible.❤ ❤ ❤

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Amazing

Loved it! Please write a second part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
What’s with all the bots?

The story was nice. A sequel would be nicer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

I can't wait to read more. There are so many directions you could take this, I'm excited to find out which you choose.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Impressive story

It's difficult to write about sex without stories and the phrases that are used becoming a bit stale and cliched yet you really managed to write a fresh and interesting story that rose above somehow. Great writing. Write more!

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My stories tend to come from ideas that I find hot at the time, so there are quite a few different themes among them. If there is a unifying concept across the board, I'm quite interested in exploring different dynamics of D/s relationships so something along those lines usual...

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