All Comments on 'I'm Bored'

Great story line, I would love to read more, but the other comments are also correct, just try to clean it up and don't give up.

....then why read it and then be so nasty to a first-time author. We can't all be M.A.'s in English. Why not read the story and forget the mistakes - you might be surprised to find that the story is so enjoyable.

Yes, your grammar and spelling was shit, but so is that of the people complaining! "I pucked reading that." Ha Ha! Try 'puked'

Loved the beach setting.

If you were really in France you would know that the word is 'chic' and not 'chique' which means 'chew' or 'a piece of chewing tobacco'!