by CorbinC
This was hot.I like the development of the relationships between Joyce, Monica and 9. You write so well. I am looking forward to the next chapter - a clear 5*.
You fit everyone together so wonderfully! I love that you have Joyce falling in love with Monica and settling in with 9. Thank you so much!
I though this was a good part, Joyce, seemed to be a bit bossy at the thanksgiving party with Monica about the social graces, but the ending seemed to make up for it can't wait for the 2nd thanksgiving at Monica parents house, wonder what they will think of 9
Joyce, what a manipulative bitch. Expected of course. She could destroy 9, but that would not reach her goals, so she have to win 9 over, not as a lover, as a self. She can't easily break Monica & 9, but she can institute a hierarchy.
Also, I wonder would we have to wait until next year to see Monica and 9 dancing in Blush in the nude, leaving dresses on chairs at their table (if 9 had any to start with, that is, but that could wait for the next time after that).