All Comments on 'I'm in Love with my Hot Biker Mom!'

son is a sadistic cruel SOB. AUTHOR! the dating SHIT should have NOT been in this story. YOU ruined a good story. there is no forgiveness for such cruelty in REALITY. you can't do it with words. FAIL!

...by the lack of comments and even more that this story was a favorite among Literotica readers. It didn’t read like English is your first language. I read the first 6 paragraphs and found the droning narrative to be redundant in several places and universally clunky in delivery.

I love it ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it, well done ....

I love the storyline. I think you have a great series in your head and hope it continues. The only problem is that it IS brutally obvious that English is not your first language. Makes for a bit of a difficult read. I give you credit for your work but would suggest a proof reader or editor. I gave it 5 stars for your story though.

I thought it was a great story that you can turn into a series.

I hope you disregard all the negative comments about you being a non-native English speaker. If I want to read a story which is 100% correct in grammar, word choices, and sentence structure, I leave Literotica and fall asleep reading something technically correct but boring.

I applaud your story line, character development, and highly charged sexual tension you create.

KEEP IT UP!!

I really enjoyed the story and can't wait for your next story to reach out to us.

Very yummy indeed! An excellent story, and very hot too! Thank you!

It's not easy to produce a mother/son incest story that is different, or better than the hundreds which have gone before. We need encouragement. But what's with the inverted speech commas at the outset? Some guidance needed there...

Advice: serious editing. Grammar, spelling.

But keep up the good work! We need the stimulation...

This story kept my interest. Wished there was more pages. Keep the stories coming.

The fact that I have the need to read it again and again... Cause it was that fucking hot and the wife will benefit for I have read this story. ;)

Having the first dozen or so paragraphs all be surrounded by quote ("") was annoying. If it's not dialogue, don't use the double-quotes, especially for multiple paragraphs in a row.

Very HOT romantic and well written descriptive story.

Like Luke- Maddy I would like to see more pairing happened with Maddy e.g. Ronny-Maddy, Steven- Maddy etc.

For those slightly complaining. No, english is not my first language.

I had a couple of editors for my projects, but I gave up on them after most of them ditched me halfway through the process of editing. I contacted them multiple times without getting a response back and that's a door closer for me.

So i'm sorry if some sentences are off or the grammar/spelling fails here and there.

Very nice way of expression but less dialogue between son and mom.8fbb

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What a great love story! I was going to remark on the few trivial grammar issues but you quelled those with your "Engrish" comment so now I have no disparaging remarks to make. It was a one of those stories you can't pause for any reason! I have added it to my personal favorite list as well as the Lit favorite list. Thank you for the story. Please don't add any outsiders to this couple, they are stand alone.

It wasn't a bad story but you need another chapter to it

I didn't know English wasn't your native tongue. If I've read it before on your stories I must've forgot.

Well done.

And maybe a chapter on their holiday would be a nice thing to see.

Please consider that.

and mommy still has to drive him around...wimp much?

I realize that English must not be your first language. Your stories would be so much better if you would get an editor that had a firm grip on the language and its syntax. Other than that, keep writing. I loved this story. I am not a big fan of making incestuous babies though.

more chapters please 5 stars

Yes, there are errors in this story, but I've read stories that have gone through editors and still there were mistakes. Did I like the stories any less? No. I've also read stories that were well written and the author made one mistake with the main character and I stopped reading it. That was the first time I left a bad comment. I did like it and felt that I should not have commented on the story. When a comment starts off with, " You obviously don't know the English Language...", that's so condescending that nothing after that can be considered constructive!

KEEP WRITING GOOD STORIES!

Making a few mistakes is fine, and as you write more stories you will end up making fewer. The only time that I start to hate a story is if there are so many mistakes that you just can’t follow the story anymore.

First unlike the others...I will not comment on your grammatical errors...everyone makes them...that is why we have editors...Your Story Is F-Ing Hot !! The way you carried the storyline is excellent...Please Do More Stories Like This !!

Your Fan...Rebeldad805

Thank you this was one unbelievably hot story and i loved it.

Awesomely written , I would like to read a story of A brother and sister where brother is handsome and muscular and sister.......rest your own mind to it.....hey man love your stories..keep writting and keep going.

5 stars no doubt.

I Loved this Story as it was not the usual Love Story .. This is rated in My top 5 Stories here .. Thank You ..

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

If you ever stopped writing, that would be the real injustice! Thanks for such a beautiful story.

Glad to see he knocked up his mom every guy should try their mom and at least try knock them up with a kid in them.that what I did to my mom not once but three times we have fuck every chance I get there was one time I rammed her ass she screamed so loud made me take her even harder cum in her ass then pulled out fast felt like I ripped her asshole.told her now your ass is mine now and i fuck there every day.

You tell a good story, but your proofreader sucks. The nunerous grammatical errors really detract from my enjoyment. Sorry.

Love this story fantastic writing. Hope to see a continue if u can add more chapters, thanks Grayson

Beautiful love story.

(8/28/2021)

Well okay, I need to say that in the beginning, I couldn't reconcile biker chick with biker mommy. She seemed to be way more mommy than chick, and no self-respecting biker chick would go 20 days without being serviced, never mind 20 years. That is absolutely unrealistic, IMO. I can understand the no relationship angle but celibacy is not in a biker's vocabulary. But still, this was a nice read and the ending was very well done.

5 stars, amazing story, this is one that I truly wish you would continue, but after all this time I guess you never will. I keep coming back to read it over and over, a great love story.

To love, there is no such thing as forbidden nor boundaries. Sex is how humans truly express our deepest love and affection for another person. The respect, adoration, and emotional chemistry between mother and son, as depicted in this story, is how I would expect a real life incestuous couple would have/feel for each other. This is a beautiful story.

Excellent!

11/10 V-Rods!!!!!

Nothing like a good old Incest Impregnation

This should be 3 star no oral sex waste of time