All Comments on 'I'm Katrina, This is My Story Ch. 01'

by Midnight_Sleeper

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visioneervisioneerover 8 years ago

You write well. Looking forward to reading more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Haha! Still laughing!

No one believes this is true for even a second. Look where you are. A porn site on the world wide web. There isn't a kernel of truth anywhere. So telling us you've changed the names to protect the innocent just makes me laugh harder! Too funny.

No stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Liked it

You write well and fluidly. The little girl about to become a woman and yet scared of it is conveyed well, and it didn't just dcscend to a good rooting just for the sake of the story. I'll watch out for more, this story could build into something well worth reading. Unlike anonymous above I'm not bothered if this is factual or not, we are asked to comment on the story, so I have.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good reading

I like the rich world of a woman's inner thoughts and feelings - as described here.

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