All Comments on 'I'm Not Dead Yet'

I didn't think it needed a warning, but she's the editor. ~sigh~

You slave and slave over too many commas and words left out and all they wanna do is poke fun.

You have a warped sense, deary. But alas, this was another good one. Keep it up (lest I be out of a job).

At the end you try to humanize a necrophiliac?

It would have been better under humour had she unleashed her wrath.

I really like your other stories though.

Wow, I never have read a story where the main character was in after life spirit status or whatever you might want to call it. The author did warn the reader. This storyline of death and dying is not my cup of tea. Well, the writing was good, but the storyline, as I said, death and dying is too depressing and sad for me.