All Comments on 'I'm Not Like That! Ch. 02'

...to have you pick this story back up again. Hopefully, future chapters won't be so long in coming! The writing and imagery really make the story flow -- can't wait to see what happens next.

mmmm wild like me in my dreamslol

What a wonderful combination of eroticism and story. Great lead up and building of the tension. Can't wait to read more.

Excellent story, please continue

you capture the most important part. teh psyche of beth as she gets initiated!!

i need to know if this story continues, i need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! okielinda

A beautiful story,exquisitely written!

A great follow-up to the first chapter. Erotic and passionate, the description of the setting was so detailed.

This story screams for another chapter(s). Please give us at least one where you describe how Beth is broken both psychologically and physiologically to the point where here need for Laura and Lynn is akin to an addiction.

I don't normally go for dom/sub stories but that was beautifully done.

This is a marvelous story (ch 01 and ch02). I like that you show the learning curve by comparing Beth and Lynn. This is not "breaking" a sub, as might be found in another category. The dynamic here is of education and skill acquisition. Lynn is vastly more skilled than Beth and more educated in Mistress's wishes. Beth is in awe of Lynn's skill and, unconsciously, of the adeptness of Mistress's teaching. After all, even completely untrained, Beth came without physical stimulation not because she knew how, but because Mistress intended her to come in such a manner. Now that's education (and really hot). I hope you find the opportunity to add to this series someday.

I have enjoyed these two chapters and hope that there will be more about these three very soon.

Very well written story...smiles.

Mary Jean

maryj7338@yahoo.com

I really enjoyed it -- please write some more.

this is an excellent seduction, in two chapters. I love that Mistress lets Beth discover her irresistible fascination with submission; that alone makes this story (and their relationship) so compelling for me. Showing Lynn and the extent of her training, her skillfulness, her dedication to her Mistress was incredibly sweet, erotic and impressive.

I find myself well satisfied with this pair of chapters. Thank you.

Having said as much, I cannot help but wonder what you imagine happening over the days and weeks following this encounter. Possibilities abound, and I'm sure I'm not the only one to imagine scenes that might unfold, yet you are the creator of this story. What do you imagine.

THis is so good! I love it

Goddess. That was one hot story.

Damn, these two chapters were really great!

J

Love the chapters! Can’t wait for chapter 3!