All Comments on 'I'm Not Sara (Afterwards)'

great rewrite the original ending was kinda sad as she didn't keep their baby but this one was perfect

great rewrite of the original. i don't think every story should end exactly as I like, but they should make sense.

Your writing is so hot because you displayed so much intimacy between the characters. This story is one of the best examples of incest romance. Thanks.

Thanks for sharing this great story!

hope theres more to come,would like to know if parents ever accepted the realasonship etc etc

That is fucking amazing. I am so hard no I don't know what to do about it! I need my little sis here to take care of me!

Absolutely amazing rewrite! Hope to see more from you in this category.

Way better ending than the old one. Nothing hotter than siblings getting caught fucking by their parents. I can't wait for part 4.

What a beautiful, loving story. I'm not sure what the statistics are for having 3 normal, wonderful shildren. Hope this story does not encourage other sibs to get together, but it probably will. Oh well.

Would love to see a final chapter on whether or not their parents ever accepted their relationship. Did the grandparents and grandchildren ever meet? Too many people in real life don't acknowledge the love for a parent, sibling or child and they when they are gone, it is too late. Love should always be shared, given freely without expectations. If someone can't accept it, that is their choice. Nice story.

Blessings

Most people don't realize that it normally takes at least 3 generations of inbreeding for genetic defects to occur from incest. Also there are plenty of "normal" people that get children that are born physically different/deformed, which means that unless you live in Iceland(where they are all related), the odds of mutated cyclops babies are astronomically LOW.

there love was stronger then anything on this earth and they loved each other to no end . so message to all brothers and sisters who truly love each other to no end , there's hope for you after all :)

Why is it always wonderful in these stories to get the family pregnant, why can't it be either just love or a lil more but teen pregnancy not cool.

Don't listen to anonymous pregnancy was best part.

"Hold it right there Sara" Her name is Mary remember, not Sara.

She was a bit of a bitch considering he almost asked her flat out about pregnancy and she lied to him. He was also a bastard by fucking her while she was still asleep.

If your partner is asleep you use your mouth to wake them up, skipping to fucking is rape plain and simple.

Fucking your partner while they're asleep isn't rape dumbass. You can't rape the willing... But thats why you're either single, lonely and miserable... Or trapped in a loveless, miserable marriage. The rest of us are having sex with our partners... If I wake my girl up sliding in and out of her I get a wiggle and a smile, if I wake up and she's riding me or sliding on me while Im on my side, I give her a groan and a thrust!

...closest thing to 'rape' in this story as far as I'm concerned was the sister punching holes in the condoms. She might as well have tied him up while he was sleeping and fucked him and got herself pregnant, either way it was a violation.

I thought this was an awesome story! You go, girl!

I wonder if the parents ever came around to accepting the relationship, especially now they are grandparents.

What happened with the parents?

.... real life could be this way. Love, between two people, doesn't care if the people involved are blood relatives, it is what it is. And it will happen whenever it happens.

However, incest, when it happens, is a taboo so deeply ingrained in "Society" that parents are NOT too accepting of it, and families are torn apart.

Sad but, unfortunately, true.

But I liked the story, all three chapters. Hot as hell, but loving as well.

5 Stars, for each chapter.

I loved it in spite of the fact that Leo broke up with Sara. I don't like how Mary manipulated her pregnancy, but you wrote Leo as a character who truly loved her, so I can't really complain even though it was an underhanded dirty deal. I give you a 4.5/5, and I'm forced to round up by the voting system.

You did screw up your dialog in one spot. I think it was right after Mary had her first bout of morning sickness. Leo called her 'Sara' in your dialog and she didn't correct his error.

5 Stars. Incest is a big turn on for me and I love a good romance. This story was amazing and I love that it wasn't a short story of lust between siblings but rather true love and romance. Thank you for this incredible story it is one of my favorites.

Thank you this Series was the best i've read this month. 5 stars all round.

Maybe write a part 4 where the mother comes to meet her Grandchildren and instantly falls in love ( I only say that as it seems that's the way you've written it was the dad that keeps them out not the mum).

Marshalla commented

If only ...

.... real life could be this way. Love, between two people, doesn't care if the people involved are blood relatives, it is what it is. And it will happen whenever it happens.

However, incest, when it happens, is a taboo so deeply ingrained in "Society" that parents are NOT too accepting of it, and families are torn apart.

Sad but, unfortunately, true.

I can only say that i agree 100% it it shouldn't be shunned and the only reason is because of all the bulshit about having mutated babies and stuff like that, which might i add is less likely than a non blood related couple having a down syndrome child . But with are advancements in healthcare these type of things can be screened out so in my opinion yes I agree it should be normalised.