by bedwards43
Rape? Pretty well rationalised, wasn't it? It's still a cunt of a thing to do. If you need to be that forceful to get your dick wet, you're doing it wrong buddy.
what the hell is wrong with this writer and the useless webmasters here? this story belongs in the nonconsent area nowhere else. get your useless asses in gear webmasters and move this shit to the nonconsent area NOW!
Can't say i agree with the rape but besides that it was alright also should be a rape tag on this
I'm happy to accept criticism from anyone if it's fair and respectful. I will not however accept comments which are derogatory, and come from someone who does not have any submissions, for which they themselves can be judged. I understand that this story isn't going to be liked by everyone, and I wear that, but I ask you all to judge it on the standard of the writing. Anyone who has posted here knows the amount of work that has gone into this, and so my challenge to you is, put up or shut up.
Many thanks to all who have made this, me, or one of my other stories a favourite.
I loved his sense of humor and just how well it was written! I would gladly read any more of your stories and would enjoy if you created a second story pertaining to this one maybe when the child is born! Anyway I loved it and hope you continue writing no matter what other dickheads say.
I don't mean to be rude but I have a bad past with rape and now the only people that can touch me have to be really close like a brother so the insest turns me on but can you please tag it as fighting or under a tag that warns people of the distress? Other then not being prepared for it I thought your wrighting style was descriptive I don't like the way he teased her but I think that's because of my past more then anything.
This is a good read, but personaly I would have added one more tag, since this is borderline rape if not full rape, it should be tagged as such.
When I first posted here two years ago I wasn't sure about tags, as I'd never let them influence my own choice when looking for something to read. Accordingly I didn't put anything then and never have since. The tags for all of my works have been put on by the administrators. When I started to write this story, I had no idea that it would end as it did, and was a bit surprised by it myself. I sincerely apologise for the distress caused to anyone.