All Comments on 'I'm Still "Straight" Right?'

by Curiousissy

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Rwa4768Rwa4768about 6 years ago

That was hot, I hope there is more to come.

badkarma1stbadkarma1stabout 6 years ago
more, longer and harder

Waaaaay too short. The average story has around 5000 words, including chapters. You can't create a believable character, much less two or three, have them force/seduced/rape/etc someone in a story this short. Scores reflect that. Do NOT let criticism deflect you, keep on writing. But, write more, writer longer, etc. Good luck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Similar Experience

Thanks for sharing. I had a similar experience. The guy was reaching over his head massaging my ass as his dick brushed my lips. I had no choice but to open my mouth. I later asked him how he knew. He just said "HE KNEW"

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