All Comments on 'Immortal Gift of Beauty'

I really loved youy story and do want to read much more about them.. I am moving near Seattle and will actually be near where they live.. I would be so estatic to find someone like Brosie... so wonderful emotionaly and physically.. 10 stars...

Would love to read more about these two.

Great story!!More please.This hot couple have a long way to go.

I like this story. Most of the stories I read on Literotica involve older women with young men. I lost my virginity at 15 years of age to an older woman. It was, to me, the best sex I have ever had...and I am now 74 years old. I think older women like young men mostly because of their stamina and staying power. Also, older women are more experienced and like to be in control. Young men like older women because they are past child bearing age and can't get pregnant. I look forward to a follow-up story on these two.

Good story, connects at all levels. Happy to see more.

Please continue this one. You have a possible 4 or 5 parter here. 5 stars again and you are one of my favorite authors.

a great story get him married to marina and live with mom; and knock them both up,keep, on trucking tenbears43

As a guy who once spent eight romantic nights with a a beautiful woman on Santorini I loved every minute of it. You're a really good writer. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Absolutely perfect. IMO DONT add the daughter in. you have a great gift for writing, and to me it would ruin the story line if you added in the daughter.

Guess I'm just a one woman kind of man these days. I had two threesomes in the past, both initiated by the girlfriends, and both of them ended the relationships. I'm not sure if it was guilt or jealousy on their part, but neither relationship lasted more than a couple of weeks after the thressome.

I rubbed one off reading it.

I loved this story, 5 stars. Your stories are top notch. I would continue over several chapters, leaving his family out. Bring in her mature friends. Only bring in the daughter if it becomes a threesome forever. And no other guys.

Great story. As a guy who was introduced to anal by a beautiful MILF on the Greek Isle of Mykonos which is very similar to Santorini, that story struck a cord with me. Hope there'll be further chapters

A simply stunning story, can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Great story. You always satisfy me.

More, please!

Definitely would want to read more. Story flows really well and the characters are great.

Another good story. I will admit given all the goddess stuff, I thought the woman was going to turn out to be a goddess in a bit of confusion lol. I guess technically she is, since all women are goddesses to someone. Anyway, loved the chemistry, wish it had been longer but then you're infamous for making multiple chapters so I'm sure there will eventually be more.

Great story when are we going to be able to read the next story about hank and bosie

I absolutely love this story and I can't wait to read more

I look forward to many more of their adventures together.

A great story! Very erotic! It would be great to see them get together back home and in a relationship... Eventually;) Thank you!

First of all...wonderful tale. 1) Turns out his school is in Vancouver...and his mom and Brosie work out staying at her place to save tuition. The daughter's in school somewhere else. Possible forks? Getting caught by daughter at some point. 2) Relationship develops and Brosie's Greek sister/other females visit... 3) I don't like drama but some do...maybe a falling out followed by making up or parting for a while? Reunion. 4) Mother or sister catch them...then reveal they knew...maybe mother gets interested in Brosie while Hank and she are on the outs? 5) Hank gets a job in her business...things could get interesting there, too... I'm sure your ideas will be better.

I hope they have more intimate interaction when they come back.

I want to see how they work this out at least as much as more sex between them.

These two have a lot of potential for interesting situations as they go from a covert romance into..........?

One of the best I've read so lots more please.

What a stupid question, of course I want more and going by the other comments I'm not the only one. So get your arse into gear and start producing some more chapters or else..brilliant story, well done...

A Greek goddess - and Hank? gets to have her? ! SO Cruel... I soooo wish I was in Hank's place. Greek women are the sexiest

Isn't Callidora Greek for "beautiful gift"?

I can only confirm the passion, the intense intimacy and love

I too was letting my imagination get carried away. I anticipated a fantasy version with a Goddess made manifest. This is just as much fun.

Thanks

well done!! love the sex, love the characters. i'm looking forward to the next chapters

Very enjoyable story. Looking forward to reading follow-up. Thanks for sharing!!

Brilliant story so exciting. Love being close to older women and giving them pleasure in any way they wish. This story is very well written. Thank you.

every young Man's dream. I just wonder who will catch them or figure out what is happening.

I am amazed by the proportion of really good writers contributing to Literotica. You are a leading member of that group. Wow. Really well presented.

Just discovered you through this story, which I found entrancing. Marvelously well written. Now I will need to read more of your work! Thank you for sharing your talent

Nice start! Thank you for a fun story. I hope Han osie can fuck while he's at college, Really, thank you.

As usual the bloke in this author's stories is an expert cock man even though he is only eighteen.A bit of fumbling about would have more accurate.

ah ha .. i should have study Greek not Latin..!

5 +... please continue...

Excellent