All Comments on 'Immortal Lovers'

I apologize for the errors, I will see if I can go back and edit them out so the story flows easier. Thank you for reading :)

I've been reading these stories for years, but this is just wow! Such detail and description between the two characters, I imagined everything that happened with a clear picture. The love between them is visable and so clearly seen and the magic and care of your writing is just lovely. I'm definitely reading this again :D