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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

The minimalist story is difficult to pull off. You've done a great job of it here. A lot of detail provided with few words. We can envision everything, yet are allowed to fill in many details to our own specifications. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
She undressed in front of a Doctor

He spent the next 15 years in prison. This was poorly conceived and badly thought through.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great line.

I often ponder why I've asked my husband to do some of the things we do. You just summed it up perfectly... it is that I'm searching for intensity, both physically and mentally.

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