All Comments on 'Imperfect Friends Ch. 02'

some very dark ideas

please if possible

could you keep the 'action' in present tense

personal preference

usually its a bit more engaging

plus if it drifts into ruffy duffy land

there's always the tension. "will it go to far?" element

missing from the reflective past tense

have fun !

It's really fascinating and unsettling to see the inner workings of a sexuality that's completely dependent on technology and visuals, and so disconnected from the woman that she never has an orgasm and there's no foreplay. It's practically Cronenbergian.

Ur dialogues awful.so fake

I don't know what's more retarded you or you're stupid lifestyle.

Someone hand me my glock.

Ignore the moron haters who shouldn't have read your story in the first place.

Yummy! I love it! Your gf is definitely a keeper!