All Comments on 'Impregnated by My Nephew'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Just a thought

All Indian writers take on this plot that is husband is a cuckold,other men fuck their wive and the husband normally cannot perform well in bed:therefore in India most of the kids are bastards who couldn't know their biological siblings: it is a mess over there.That maybe the case with this writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Unnecessary to Read This

Same as every other Indian cuck story Poorly written garbage. Just change the names and you have the same story. Hubby turns into a cuck and wifey is cheap whore 1* and that's to many

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Next episode?

This is not college football where a ranking of 1 is a good thing. Please don't waste our time, or yours by writing any more of this garbage. If everyone will elect me president, I promise to nuke India out of exsistance.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 11 years ago
Very hot and erotic

A small woman taking such a large cock into her body is very erotic and sexy. It was stated that her nephew will make her pregnant, but what about her nephew's sister. Who is going to make her pregnant?

A good storyline and I hope to see the next chapter soon.

Thanks for the good read.

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
Having just read a couple of really good new stories

the bar suddenly gets lowered right to the ground with this one. Dull, boring, badly-written rubbish.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 11 years ago
Well paced , Utterly Amoral Story !

Well written for a stroke story . I wish the author would lighten up on the % of sex in the story though not the intensity ) & write about the characters wherewithals & motivations . What's it like to be in India for instance ?

The introduction & carnal prelude was very well written & I wish for more of that ... a bit more of Lit to this Literotica story would make this worthy on a number of levels. The erotic part of the equation is just fine as noted previously by Dig Daddy Rich .

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Sorry

Firsst of all I would like to give you credit for writing a story in what is obviously not your native language. Despite the offten awkward phrasing, the story is not bad at all.

As for the comments left before mine, I apologize for their ignorance. Looking at their pathetic grammar and spelling, the idea that they have the nerve to criticize anybody for anything is beyond me. The racist crap they chose to add to their bile should tell you all you need to know about them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Not Sorry

The writer like the other Indian submissions have all been on "cuckold husband" and slut wives.If you do not want the vitriolic comment by the "haters" change your story path and they would not be any racist comment So far until then,there is no story by like writers to dispense the notion that "Indian have a fetish for cuckold stories" , sansar the floor is yours.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Loved it! Thank you for sharing your talent of heated passion. The culture adds further excitement. Hope you will write another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hot. please continue

very hot story. I want to see this continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Hi really love the story cant wait for the second part of this story πŸ‘

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
GREAT STORY

CANT WAIT FOR FURTHER PARTS OF STORY.

I AM RINA, SOUTHINDIAN HOUSEWIFE 32.

rinakrishna3@yahoo.co.in

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
liked that niyog ....!!! :)

Liked the pace with which you write.

Prav from agra M/36

pravagra2015@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great writing

Appreciate the wonderful writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
12" Dick

Tool fucking crap

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
5 good read. Annony is just

the boil on the ass of the world and hates everyone. His did is 1.2 inches long!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
add the next episode

what a great story... please add the next episode

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Please continue

Waiting for more....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excellent. Please continue!

Beautifully written. Truly erotic. Excellent elements of contrasts, lust, it has everything. Continue!

junamjunamalmost 4 years ago

Titillating story, written with attention to detail. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fabulous

Amazing story. I have read all the submissions by this author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
:) ❀

🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟- (5-).

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Perfect Asian Hot Wife

Realistic! Except for the fact that Asians ( Indians ) don't have 12 inches penis.

The story is an excellent idea to convert an uptight Asian conservative wife to a Hot Wife and really enjoy life to its full content

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

is it a fct

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great πŸ‘Œ eagerly waiting for next part . This do happen in India . One of my friends size is 9 inches

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Where is the second part

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I am an Indian college girl (18). I remember, four years before, that day I was feeling cramps, so I returned home. I looked around for Amma (mother; 33 years, then) for the main door keys, but could not find her. We lived in a n old bungalow constructed by Dadaji, having a huge lawn, two servant quarters and one for Gardner-cum- Watchman, Rikhab jaat (38 years). I was waiting for Amma in the verandah, and I could not easily be seen, because the verandah was covered by shrubs etc. After 20 minutes I saw Amma coming out of our Gardner's room, and him following Amma; he was wrapping his tehmat (wrap around). He grabbed my Amma's breasts and took her in his arms, caressing her butts etc. Amma soon wrapped her arms around his neck, kissing him passionately. When Amma came to the verandah to open the main door to enter the house, she found me sitting there. For once she was shocked, but soon composed herself, I did not say anything, but at night Amma came to my bedroom and probed me; she tricked me and ultimately from my stuttering and facial expression, she could find out that i had seen her after she came out of Gardner's room. My younger sister had gone with Maami (maternal aunty) to her city, around 230 kms, and Papa was in Delhi for business.

Surprisingly, Amma had called the Gardner at night and they had sex till early next morning; next night again the Gardner came at night, but a day after the Gardner and his Muslim mechanic friend (SUHEL, 48 years) came at night. I had watched them doing sex all these night. I was feeling horny after watching them. I did not get proper sleep for three days, so tried to sleep after returning to my room around 1.40 a.m., after watching their threesome sex. It must be at 2.45 a.m., when I woke up feeling someone in my bed. From his figure I knew it was the Muslim mechanic in my bed. I started trembling with fear, because I knew he was a local bully as well. I could not fight him when he started playing with my body or when he undressed me. He took my virginity with his humongous cock. Before leaving me completely naked in my bed, in the morning around 5 a.m. he had ravished my body three times, cumming inside me, filling me to overflow. I was asked to walk to the washroom without a stitch on my body, while he rested in my bed. After returning from the bathroom, I had to give blowjob, except for the first time when I had bled after losing my cherry, with some semen still sticking on his cock. He would hardly take two minutes to regain the hardness once again. He would take my naked body on his hairy muscular strong naked body. At the time of leaving my bedroom in the morning, he told me that he may come to me in the day, but at night, he will definitely come. A few days later, I came to know that besides our Gardner, my Amma had slept with the mechanic and at least 12- 15 of his friends/ relatives.

Pooja Joshi

WildErotica69WildErotica69over 1 year ago

Where’s the second part ???

luap50luap504 months ago

The story is very interesting and leaves the reader wanting more. I think Ashok, the Seema's husband, is infertile and plotted everything with his nephew Jeetu. Ashok wants Seema to get pregnant by someone of his own blood: Who's better for this mission than stud Jeetu, a fuck machine? The author leaves clues: why did Jeetu know Seema's nickname (Snoopy)? More: the husband made everything easy for Seema and Jeetu fuck freely. But the mystery remains in the air with the upcoming arrival of Jeetu's sister. We wait the next episode.

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