All Comments on 'Impregnating my Sister-N-Law Ch. 03'

You're too fast and too short ! Write more deeply !

Continue story please! Maybe get Mike's wife involvedd with her sister!

Well, let me tell YOU something, Mister. I've had my eyes on my brother-in-law since their wedding night. I know I am much more of a woman than my sister, if you know what I mean. This story went out right quick to him. Anonymous, of course. But still, now he knows IT'S MY TURN.

Keep your fingers crossed for me. I'll tell you how it goes.

Collette

PS. Love how you write, fast and furious!

Please please please! Learn how to spell! There is a difference between

"your" and "you're". And between "to" and "too". And so many other failures.

IF you insist on writing,spelling is an integral, indispensable part of this art.

Please find someone literate to proofread your stories,so that they will not

seem to be the illiterate ramblings of a clueless hayseed.However,the sex in

your work is fairly hot,but could stand some spicing up,by tightening up your

prose. Good luck.

This is not incest .It is a rape and gratuitous violence story and total shite from go to whoa.

I cannot believe there's another chapter. Yeah.