All Comments on 'Impregnating Niece - Four Surprises'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
good stuff

I quite enjoyed this tale and would like to read more with these characters...

Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Love impregnation stories

Loved your story...need more like this

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
?

I usually love these stories; however, this one just feels creepy....

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
lovely

A lovely story of family members helping each other out when the problem is should be kept private and the positive results are in keeping with what "normally" happens in the community.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I QUIT

I had read several paragraphs when I realized there were no quotation marks.

So I quickly scrolled through, scanning for quotation marks.

Sure enough, it was being told without dialog.

When there are so many stories with dialog,

why bother with one that is without?

Paul in Oklahoma

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