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All Comments on 'Impregnation Cruise Ch. 01: Departure'

by Scorpius1945

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Looking forward to the next chapter

Great story keep it up and hopefully you will post again soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Despite the previous anon's well thought out comment (NOT), the grammar and punctuation were quite good. The story was a bit different to the usual 'cruise ship' formula type, which is a plus. What else can the author inject to retain my interest?

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