All Comments on 'Impregnation Cruise Ch. 06: Our Nude Wedding'

There were, however, a couple of issues/discrepancies. Early on in the chapter it was stated that Charles was keeping the honeymoon secret but, in the end, there was no honeymoon. There was no mention of whether her mother attended the wedding or not. Finally, the timeline was somewhat out. In the previous chapter the wedding was planned to be within weeks of their return home. While that would have been enough to confirm her pregnancy - it would not have been long enough for her tummy to start filling out. The only other thing I would mention is that the confirmation of her pregnancy was mentioned as a side comment - which is a shame as this was the whole purpose of the story in the first place.

OK - these are very small nits to pick and, in reality, it didn't spoil a very good story. I still gave it 4*.

btw: I was expecting the final twist where Charles was clearly not the babies genetic father. Didn't spoil it though.