All Comments on 'Impromptu Attraction'

Very realistic,very well written.

This was very refreshing.

Please continue with more!!!

felt good about the rest of the day after your story

Excellent use of language and straight-forward movement of story line. However, with Marilyn's string of ex-husbands I wouldn't recommend her as a "good authority" on relationships.

I remember reading this not too long ago and thinking it was a pretty good story, but I can't remember the title or the author.

This is a rewrite. The original version is called "Love Unrequited" and has been edited and moved to the Non-Erotic category.

Knew you could do it! =D

nice