All Comments on 'In a Bottle... Ch. 01'

I love genie stores, and am glad to see another one here. I like how you have put a twist on making their relationship not quite master and genie, but still similar. I will definitely be reading as you post more. Keep up the good work!

most decidely an interesting start of a story. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Nice start to the story line, different twists on the age old theme. Please don't keep us waiting long like our mutual favorite used to do...

Thank you!

This story sounds Very familiar. Is this a re-write under a new name?

OMG!!! Talk about hot!!!! great chapter!!!

There aren't enough well written genie stories. Keep it up! :D

Mmmmm...salmon and prawns...mmm...

Totally was a good idea to go through your favorite authors, bashfullyshameless :D.

Keep up the good work Zeban, love your writing!

So far, this is exactly the genie story I was looking for when I searched for one.

I can barely wait to go read the next one.

Liked the way everything is Going. Like someone else said a "perfect" Genie story.

Mulder finding a Genie who granted him 3 wishes. His third was to set her free. (I'm not accusing you of plagiarism, since there haven't been any original stories in 2500 years...)

This story has 5 chapters then just ends with the author not completing his work or adding anything for 3.5 years. If you don't want to be frustrated with an incomplete story, you should avoid this.

Thanks for the warning but He's back!

AWESOME!!!!