All Comments on 'In Celebration of Redheads'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Celebrating

A slow, hot build-up... could have used a less 'hasty' conclusion. Overall? Great!

Lukas

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~about 19 years ago
Slow and Sensual

I agree with the previous comment. You set that scene wonderfully. I like the little details, especially about the kiss. Thanks!

~hb

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