All Comments on 'In Debt'

The story was generally well told, particularly as she discovered how much she was liking it. The revelation that she was going to have to whore herself was underplayed and too unemotional. Given how much she enjoyed it the ending felt incomplete. Did she go back for more-or did they change garages. It had to be one of them!

Personally I could have done with less humiliation for the husband(the whole situation was quite enough) and much less description of how grease-covered George was.

Shouldn't this be classified as Loving Wives? Nevertheless its a good read.

Welcome back, Chrissie. Your stories are varied and good to read. This is the erotic version of a situation drama. It could happen, but for £3000 UK I'd want much more. I agree with the other comment. Too much grease and a real kick in the balls for your husband. Make your point, but don't put readers off with depictions of grease and grime.

Thank you. A wonderful account - I thoroughly enjoyed it.

You wrote:

"He soon got into a rhythm, his cock rubbing against my enlarged clitty. He had made it so sensitive with his tongue that it felt oh, so sexy as his cock rubbed in and out."

How can his cock be rubbing against the clit if it is inside a vagina ..... your heroine must be built really strangely ...

I find it quite upsetting that people can put pen to paper so to speak, to criticise others work, this story and all my stories are pure fiction, and as such can be anything I want them to be, so please don't pick at the story just because it doesn't fit your personal fantasy, and yes a real man can make his cock rub on a woman's clitoris, in missionary, but then again I'm only a woman I wouldn't know, What I'm trying to say is if you haven't got anything good to say, please keep it to yourself

Chrissie39 (The Author)

Hot Hot story! Hubby will get a company car, and her car will still need repairs. George is one lucky mechanic!

Good old Hubby provides the basis for Chrissie's favourite fantasy......make him watch her enjoying being treated to a wonderful, rough fuck. Cock in hand, I enjoyed, as always, every minute. You ring my bells!

Very enjoyable and realistic

The grease and grime made it more believable as the local garage man would be working hard each day. Not every sexual interplay takes place between 2 freshly showered people

Another great story thank you

I'm coming to the party a little late, having just discovered you. This is an old fantasy of mine, paying off a debt with sexual favors, and you certainly handled it very well. A cuckold in the equation is not part of my own fantasy, but hey, as you say, we should be flexible and it's your story, after all. Definitely five stars from me! JB

Wonderful! You described a fantasy of mine, being fucked hard by a burly, unkempt man in order to pay my husband's debt. Top score!