All Comments on 'In Heat'

Great story I love the way you keep cummin and cummin for your F/B he worked your body well

The author killed the story when the use of "coming and/or come" for an orgasm, which any grade school kid knows the right common slang is "cum/cumming". Thus stopped reading at that point.

Cum or come... does it matter? Everyone knows they both mean the same, in this context. Except the stupid arsehole who wrote the infantile comment. It was well-written. Four from me.

Yes, they can be used interchangeably. Loved this story! Very hot and overall was a great read. Hope to see more submissions from you in the future!

"Come" is grammatically accurate and the meaning was fully obvious so ignore the other person's comment. One of the best stories I've come across in a long time. The only complaint I have is that it's too short, which considering I don't normally read a story if it's more than 2 pages says a lot about how good this story is! I really look forward to your future contributions.

First off, I am an impatient reader when it comes to erotic stories - I want things to get going immediately! That said, I enjoyed this tale. It moved at a good pace and really got into the mindset of the female main character. As for the sex, it was well-told, although I was hoping for a little more decadence, especially coming from an author who's name is "wantonslave." Still, I enjoyed it and I hope this author gets on the ball and gives us another. Come on Wantonslave, get on it! And no holding back this time!

Well written, now that I've read both your stories, I know you write wonderful stories. Keep up the good work, and take as much room as you need to . Expand the stories with more character building or story line building.