All Comments on 'In Heaven'

by 2pinacoladas

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Obviously...

English is not this writer's first language. Far too many times, the wrong word was used. And there was far too much 'swinging' and far too little familial contact in this tale that was posted under "Incest / Taboo"!

Best I can give this tale is a "2".

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I would like this story to continue

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