by emeralds75
Just found your stories.....I enjoyed them....can't wait for the next chapter
I don't understand why your female lead is languishing in hell at all, she seems very innocent and not at all evil. I feel quite bad for her. It may be interesting to have her 'corrupt' her tormentor into being good and not vice versa. I'd like to see him being snared with his own trap.
I knew I'd read something similar and it was you !! Loving your work :-)
I've been enjoying your stories a lot. However, I'm confused because I remember 3 previous chapter, which would make this number 4, but lit is only showing 3 chapters posted. Wasn't there a previous chapter dealing with a chaise lounge? Isn't that why this chapter has the word again in its title? Anyways, another great instalment. I look forward to more :-)
Hi, everyone!
Thanks a lot for all your comments! I love to get feedback for my stories...:-)
As you've probably noticed, these chapters are part of a much larger story which, unfortunately, I can't post here as I don't want to violate rules, etc. Now, if you're interested in reading the whole thing (everything makes sense and all your questions will be answered...promise!), you can find it here
http://emeralds75.livejournal.com/3985.html
Hope you keep reading and enjoying!