All Comments on 'In Her Eyes'

Great beginning to the story... but it just ended way to abruptly. You put so much detail into the first part of the story... them BOOM... done... with no more details about the punishments, what cards she drew. It left me feeling deprived

I like stories with some ambiguity. How I see this story might be terribly different than others. If he's reached his age and never had a blowjob, if he admits to avoiding confrontations, nd admits that after a time, his wife became more and more modest about showing her body, I see a useless lazy closed off disengaged husband who lacks passion as a general rule. She grew modest because he kept silent and never gave her admiration, she never gave a BJ because he never slurped up her pussy. A fucktard of a husband, though he does seem to be good with tools. She did deserve that ; her orgasm!

13 X 25 = 325 not 625

Agree ended way to quickly

Thank you for your comments. Seven pages of narrative and you point out a typographical error! Yes 625 should read 325 as that is the approximate conversion of 5 1/2 hours. While we are being pedantic, the discipline you mean is arithmetic not mathematics and the abbreviation of mathematics is maths not 'math'. Love and kisses , I_Wish.

NO NEVER! If I was this woman I would go straight to a hospital, then the police to have him arrested for assault and first thing next day a divorce lawyer. (why such vicious punishment?, shes not a gun runner, drug smuggler or a granny mugger, there is no hint that she is into consensual BDSM or a 'painslut')

My husband and I love bdsm. Can you suggest more brutal ways for him to punish me? I have been a terrible wife. Once he even displayed me naked to all his Male friends and let them finger me and fist my ass. And like a dirty little whore I loves it. I came all over the place. Now he's angry. He hits me everyday and keeps me bound and naked but he's still not satisfied. He says I deserve much worse.. I want to please him. He's angry. Please help

First and most importantly this was NOT in anyway BDSM - common consensus holds that BDSM is 1. SAFE

2. SANE

3. CONSENSUAL

We have no way of knowing if 1 or 2 were adhered to but it most definitely was not consensual.

You set out to humiliate and punish her, you achieved the former but we can only presume that you did the latter as well. Whilst you laid out the process the punishment was to take you never actually specified what punishment she received.

What you were suggesting was ridiculously dangerous, clamps on her nipples for 5 1/2 hours? That would cause nerve damage quite possibly permanent. It’s impossible to go from repressed housewife to painslut in one go.

In isolation several parts of the story were erotic in theory but the reality would have a very different result with several outcomes ranging from, hospital, prison for both follwed by divorce.

The only positive points that cross my mind are that lube was used and the element of aftercare although if the aftercare took place hours after being beaten (because she was forced into a cage for ‘n’ hours) then it’s was probably pointless.