In Her Eyes

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She started, almost imperceptibly at first, to move with the direction of my rubbing, and then against it using my hand like a scratching post and pressing herself against me. I kept up my slow rhythm but her movement speeded up, becoming in turn urgent, demanding and frantic until finally she let out series of piercing shrieks, far more intense than any sound she had made under the lash, and exploded into a succession of wrenching orgasms.

When it was over she just lay back on the bed and closed her eyes and said dreamily "I deserved that".

Yes I thought, but which part did she mean?

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

First and most importantly this was NOT in anyway BDSM - common consensus holds that BDSM is 1. SAFE

2. SANE

3. CONSENSUAL

We have no way of knowing if 1 or 2 were adhered to but it most definitely was not consensual.

You set out to humiliate and punish her, you achieved the former but we can only presume that you did the latter as well. Whilst you laid out the process the punishment was to take you never actually specified what punishment she received.

What you were suggesting was ridiculously dangerous, clamps on her nipples for 5 1/2 hours? That would cause nerve damage quite possibly permanent. It’s impossible to go from repressed housewife to painslut in one go.

In isolation several parts of the story were erotic in theory but the reality would have a very different result with several outcomes ranging from, hospital, prison for both follwed by divorce.

The only positive points that cross my mind are that lube was used and the element of aftercare although if the aftercare took place hours after being beaten (because she was forced into a cage for ‘n’ hours) then it’s was probably pointless.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I'm a whore

My husband and I love bdsm. Can you suggest more brutal ways for him to punish me? I have been a terrible wife. Once he even displayed me naked to all his Male friends and let them finger me and fist my ass. And like a dirty little whore I loves it. I came all over the place. Now he's angry. He hits me everyday and keeps me bound and naked but he's still not satisfied. He says I deserve much worse.. I want to please him. He's angry. Please help

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

NO NEVER! If I was this woman I would go straight to a hospital, then the police to have him arrested for assault and first thing next day a divorce lawyer. (why such vicious punishment?, shes not a gun runner, drug smuggler or a granny mugger, there is no hint that she is into consensual BDSM or a 'painslut')

I_WishI_Wishover 11 years agoAuthor
Dear Anonymous,

Thank you for your comments. Seven pages of narrative and you point out a typographical error! Yes 625 should read 325 as that is the approximate conversion of 5 1/2 hours. While we are being pedantic, the discipline you mean is arithmetic not mathematics and the abbreviation of mathematics is maths not 'math'. Love and kisses , I_Wish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Bad math

13 X 25 = 325 not 625

Agree ended way to quickly

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