All Comments on 'In Lauren's Image'

This could be a 100% true story except for a few identities.

Which is character is a real person?

a. Brian

b. Lauren

c. Mary

More characters in second part.

d. Clay

e. Meredith

f. Jay

g. Alice

This story was sent to my ex-girlgriend in Texas. She got so hot and wet. I think she is coming to visit me.

I am gonna need some lube.

This story is a good start. The imagination is there but you have to be more patient. A good story is not put together in a couple of pages. You rushed the encounter with Lauren, Mary and yourself as if your mother was coming into the room and you only had a few seconds of writing left. Settle down, take your time and above all else enjoy what you are doing.

Loved the story. Lauren is one hot control babe. I hope there is more to this story, I can't wait to see how far she pushes her boyfriend

Currently typing more chapters.