All Comments on 'In My Skin: What is This?'

by loveislove0922

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome beginning

Please don't fall into that sense that all stories need to be dragged out to be good. Yours is very good though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Worth the wait.

Even though I hate waiting. I wish out was longer of course but it's moving at a good pace. So far. I agree with the other comment, don't drag out the story too long. But I can feel this will be a good one.

There seems to have been some breakdown in communication between them. But hopefully it doesn't take them too long to figure that out and get back together

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More

Please!! This has the potential to be explosive when they hit the bedroom!

Leo971Leo971about 8 years ago
Sensual

I can't wait for the next chapter! I wish I would have taken this first step 20 years ago keep up the excellent writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Don't leave it hanging. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More please!

I'm hooked. Want to know about these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Please continue!!!!!

Now I’m hooked and I need more please! Come back!

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