by loveislove0922
Please don't fall into that sense that all stories need to be dragged out to be good. Yours is very good though.
Even though I hate waiting. I wish out was longer of course but it's moving at a good pace. So far. I agree with the other comment, don't drag out the story too long. But I can feel this will be a good one.
There seems to have been some breakdown in communication between them. But hopefully it doesn't take them too long to figure that out and get back together
Please!! This has the potential to be explosive when they hit the bedroom!
I can't wait for the next chapter! I wish I would have taken this first step 20 years ago keep up the excellent writing!