All Comments on 'In Over His Head Ch. 05'

Can't wait til the next chapter.

I like the story aspect.i just wish the dude wasn't such a bitch all the time.

I know at times it may seem like Edovan is too much of a push over.. I assure you that is not the case.. plus hes going to be learning.. building his confidence.. eventually able to hold his own with the ladies.. and he's a fast learner! But he's a little hampered in interactions with ladies because of some things that haven't been revealed yet. Like as you will see if you keep reading.. he has big trouble with the word "no"

Good job at hinting toward character growth. If you pay off the foreshadowing this has a good story to go with the heat as well. I think it is interesting to have the story be the slow burn while the sex has the immediate payoff. Cool approach.