All Comments on 'In Paradise Ch. 02'

You have a ton of raw talent, but I'd like to see you get a good editor.

...good job developing the insatiable sexuality which she hopes to satisfy in your stories about her job as the beach bar's erotic masseuse at the Hilton's African nudist resort near Miami..she is popular and averages 18 half hour "sessions" per day and they are live on the internet 24/7 .she loves the massively hung huge basketball players ..what fun...Looking forward to your "massage" stories ...many thanks ,,,, ::::: ]]]]] }}}}}

:( I can't believe you left this!!!

Great story

they both seem like huge jerks to me.. and maybe I misread, its been a long day but were they trying to allude to him being partial to men with the preference given to women... this is what happens when insomnia meets wine ppl