All Comments on 'In Praise of Clair'

You just can't write. Stop.

I lonely all the time, just on thing that jumped out, and I (de) clair that this really is not very good.

Please find an editor !

Ha ha yr funny

Story had a lot of promise, work on your writing. The ending sucked, you could have had additional chapters.

Keep writing and there are plenty of editors that will help you. Don't listen to all the haters. Those who cant do bitch and criticize.

You have lots of talent and a good imagination. Please keep writing and be encouraged.

Good characters, round not flat and sympathetic too. You are a fine writer. Your story was complete as written and needed nothing more. Some of the comments are just baffling and foolish. No wonder most hid behind anonymity. I gave Claire a 5 and both my girl friend and I would have given it 6 stars if that were possible. Thank you. We are mining your work for more great stories.

A nice experience with a mature lady and a very good story-line.The last part of departing is excellent-mature thinking by Mrs.Clerie as well Press.Thanks for such

a short and gripping story.

I wonder if the earlier critics of this story ever came back to read any of the newer stories. I bet they have.

Thanks for a good read.

Warren

Very classy, I love it! Thank you!

I've carried a similar wound for the one "I let get away". Love your work

Touching and bitter-sweet. Left me rather sad.