All Comments on 'In Pursuit of Mrs Kramer Ch. 02'

by nevets13

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
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excellent. keep on writing please !

biphilmassbiphilmassover 8 years ago
Keep this going

This story has great potential so please keep writing !!!!!

5 stars for both chapters so far !!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A great story - canĀ“t wait to read more of it !

A lot of different ways to develop the characters ( not only Chris and Donna....) of this wonderful story !

orientalistorientalistover 8 years ago
Lots of potential!

Great story so far! Can't wait to read how the story develops. Love the stockings and that she isn't just throwing herself at him. Very good... keep it up! :)

encore769encore769over 8 years ago
My fantasy

I easily identified with Mrs. Kramer, Donna, as the story reminded me of the fantasies I have of being seduced by a younger man. I wish I had a neighbor like this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome

Looking forward to more keep them Cummmmminggg !!!!

lickherclitlickherclitover 8 years ago
Great Writing

I'm no expert, but I loved the story and it read so easily. Hope you write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More

Have been looking for weeks now for the next chapter and her desires becoming more impassioned! Hope it will not be much longer for another installment.

nevets13nevets13over 8 years agoAuthor
In the works

Thanks for the feedback! The next chapter is in submission now.

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