by FernieLyn
Not all stories have, or need to have, a "storybook" ending. It's great the way it is.
All I can say is it felt like a true story. If it isn't true then you have done a very good job of putting the reader into your world. I'm off to look n see if you have written a sequel! Hope so! ta-ta
As always, your beautiful writing style paints wonderful pictures. Yet another high quality story from a high quality writer. Love it.
Not exchanging addresses - wow
Maybe they'll find each other on facebook.
A sequel would be wunderschon.
I know that this is maybe too much to ask from amateur erotica writers but you really should gather more information about the peoples you write about.
I am from Austria myself and i live in a city, study and know not one "Hans". Neither do I know anyone by the name of Gretchen or something like that. They exist but are names of grandparents.
Only about half of Austria has mountains like the alps and last but not least:
Why the hell should we be uncomfortable to speak about the sound of music because of ww2?
Let's say I won't write about Americans as fat people who are narrow-minded, dumb and members of ku-klux clan and you won't write about blonde Hans anymore...
This story is absolutely beautiful and feels like it is happening. I truly loved every word.
I scored you 5 stars and left you a private message
L.M.